Road Trip

      Missed a day because the internet was down.

      Jim and I took a weekend trip and had several hours in the car to play "What If."  I've found it's the best place to work out plot lines and fix weak spots.

      I don't know if it's the forward motion of the car or that you're isolated with no distractions, but it works.

      We identified what was missing--tension and drama--in  the first chapters and I'm back at work with lots of new ideas.



Working from the other end

       Writing books is fun...a lot of research and work, but fun. Selling books? Not so much.

        However, last night I met with a book club and had a great time talking about Crossing the Moss Line and introducing them to the characters in my other two books, Shorter's Way and Waterproof Justice. Made some new friends and sold some books. That's my kind of promotion!

       Worked on chapter 7 of the new book yesterday, but realized I needed to do some more research before I could finish. So that's my task for today.

Moonshine is still around

As I said yesterday, our first stop was the Dawsonville Distillery, small batch, hand-craft distillery and home to Bill Elliot’s Moonshine! (The City Hall is in the same building. Gotta love it!)

I bought books (of course) Mountain Spirits and More Mountain Spirits by Joseph Earl Dabney. Apparently these are the Bible of Moonshine because they keep popping up in my other research. The third book is Driving with the Devil, Southern Moonshine, Detroit Wheels, and the Birth of NASCAR.

I also started learning a new vocabulary: backins, bead, beer (it’s not what you think, it’s the first stage of whiskey making, fermented mash) doubling liquor, malt, mash, worm, proof, thump barrel, trippers (that’s not what you think either, it’s moonshine haulers) the list is endless. And this was only the beginning.

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Catching up from the beginning

OK, let’s go back to the beginning. I was looking for a subject for a new book and decided to explore the gold rush here in Georgia. Jim and I went to Dahlonega, I bought some books, we went through the museum and even panned for gold. All interesting, but the gold rush started in 1829 which is about a hundred years outside my comfort zone.

 

On the way home we discovered the Dawsonville Moonshine Festival. Good subject, right time frame. So I bought some books, we went through the museum, visited a local (legal) moonshine distillery and even tasted white lightning. (Are you beginning to see a pattern here?) Turns out Highway #9 from Dawsonville to Atlanta was whiskey road for the trippers (drivers of the whiskey cars).  I was hooked and so began this story.



New Book in the works

I’m working on a new book and a friend from way back in junior high days suggested I write a daily blog again. Since I’ve come to a fork in the road with the writing and I’m not sure which way to go, that seemed like a good idea… and perhaps a solution to my problem.

So here goes! The name of the book is RUNNIN’ SHINE down Highway 9. It’s about Georgia moonshine in the 1920’s and 30’s and how the whiskey trippers (drivers) laid the foundation for what became NASCAR.

 Here’s my elevator speech (the whole book in 35 words or less).  Runnin’ Shine is about three friends who start out owning moonshine stills and end up owning a racing team in NASCAR. BTW, one of them is a girl.


Crossing the Moss Line Wins Awards

I am really excited to announce that Crossing the Moss Line has won the 5th Annual Beverly Hills International Book Award for Regional Fiction. www.beverlyhillsbookawards.com

 

This is in addition to being named Runner-up in the BookLife Shelf Unbound 2016 Best Indie Book, Southeast Region.

 

The latest email came yesterday. It was a great way to start the holiday season.

 

And while I have your attention, why not go to www.freethorne.com where you can read sample chapters of Shorter’s Way, Waterproof Justice and Crossing the Moss Line. FREE of course. If one of them catches your attention, go to booklocker.com to order or visit your favorite online bookstore. They make great gifts and you don’t have to worry about sizes or colors. 

 

If you live in Peachtree Hills, you can buy them directly. Just stop by 11 Roanoke and save shipping and handling.  I’ll even gift wrap them for you.

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Showdown at Senoia

When you start doing research you never know where it’s going to take you and mine has taken me to a mountain moonshine festival, an authentic moonshine distillery (legal, of course) and now to a dirt track stock car race.

 

Yep, this Saturday Jim and I will be in the grandstands at the Senoia Raceway waiting for the race to begin at 3:30.  We’ll see Hobby, Bomber, Mini, B Cadets, Super Late Models, Limited Late Models and Crate Late Models….whatever in the world they are.

 

Buckle your seat belts it’s going to be an exciting ride!!!

senoia raceway

Meet Bird, one of the main characters in Crossing the Moss Line

One of the major characters in Crossing the Moss Line is Bird, a young boy who is also a talented artist. My problem in creating him was that I am NOT an artist. I don’t know how artists see or think or feel or deal with the world.

So I turned to my friend Richard Clark (E. Richard Clark) who is an artist and he helped me bring Bird to life. Richard grew up in the south in roughly the same time frame and circumstances as Bird. When he told me, “I always knew that I could draw anything I could see,” I knew I had found my inspiration.

 

Richard did not read Crossing the Moss Line until it was published, but when he heard about this event he said, “I have a painting I did some time ago and I think it’s what Bird looks like.”

 

And he was right. Meet Bird by clicking on Crossing the Moss Line, then click on “Bird.”

 

There is probably a definition for this kind of parallel creativity, but I prefer to think of it as magic.


First step, find a story

As you know I’m looking for a subject for my next book and I may have found it…well not exactly. I still don’t have a story, but I may have a subject.

Jim and I just spent a week in the Georgia mountains. I did some research about the Georgia gold rush. Interesting, but about 100 years out of my time frame. 1849 rather than 1940.

Then I decided to explore the pottery culture in the area. Interesting subculture, but I have to work to put some drama in pottery.

Then I ran across the Mountain Moonshine Festival in Dawsonville and I thought that was very promising. Interesting subject, plenty of drama and an opportunity to create lots of characters.

Now if I just had a story……


Remember Tupperware Parties???

All the rage now are virtual book tours or blog tours which all promise a big increase in sales.

Trouble is, they get your name out there, but don’t sell books. People buy books and apparently they like to buy them from actual people.

 

A friend hosted the First Official Neighborhood Book Launch Party for my latest book, Crossing the Moss Line, and we sold 40 books.  Amazing and great fun!!!

 

So, I’ve decided to go really old school. I’m working to set up monthly Tupperware Parties without the Tupperware. Same principle, new product.  For each of these Neighborhood Book Launch Parties, the host supplies the people and light refreshments, I supply everything else: custom-designed email invitations, wine, decorations, prizes, cups, plates, napkins, a photo display and of course BOOKS.  I’ll also be meeting with book clubs whenever I’m invited.

 

So far, I’ve lined up a meeting with one of my favorite book clubs, Wine, Women and Words and a wine-tasting, book-signing, photo-viewing event with pH Wine Merchants. This one is free and open to the public, so come join us October 29, from 2P:00 – 4:P00 at pH Wine Merchants.  www.phwinemerchants.com 

 

Negotiations are on-going for an event in December and April. Stay tuned for more information. And if you’d like to host an event, by all means, let me know. 


Keep your fingerd crossed!

One way to publicize a new book is to submit it to competitions. I did that with my first book, Shorter’s Way, and won an Independent Publisher Award for Best Regional Fiction.

 

I’ve submitted Crossing the Moss Line and as part of their judging process I received the following Critic’s Report from The BookLife Prize in Fiction:

 

“In this novel, set on Ibo Island during the early 1940’s, readers are reminded that “good comes from bad” as a variety of characters make decisions that have unintended consequences. Well-developed and slightly shady characters bring the action to life in a skillfully crafted tale. Hawthorne has evidently researched Southern folklore, making this an authentic and enjoyable story.”

 

Here’s my score:

Plot/Idea: 9

Originality: 7

Prose: 8

Character/Execution: 10

Overall: 8.50

 

I hope that means I’m in the running for bigger and better things. Keep your fingers crossed. 



Now it Begins!!!

Blog here.

Crossing the Moss Line is now official and the business of  launching it begins. Friday September 9 Doug Dahlgren hosted a one-hour interview with me on American’s Web Radio. Here’s the link:

 http://www.americaswebradio.com/podcasts/thePrologueSept09.2016.mp3 

Sunday September 11 we had the first neighborhood Book Launch Party. It was a huge success, nearly 60 people showed up and we sold 40 books!!!      Special thanks to hosts Betty Hanacek and Ron Loines.

 I’m beginning to line up appearances with book clubs and—on a totally different note—Jim and I have photographs at Artist Atelier Gallery and their reception is Saturday, September 17. It’s a busy, exciting time.

                                

 

Radio Interview

I'm being interviewed on American Web Radio tomorrow morning. You can hear the broadcast at http://americaswebradio.com/ at 11am. Just "click" on the radio icon's play button.

The show will play live like an mp3 in your computer.

On Monday, Sept 12, when the podcast is ready, it will be posted on Doug Dahlgren's  archive page :  http://americaswebradio.com/the-prologue/

Hope you'll tune in. I'll be talking about my latest book, Crossing the Moss Line.

Empty Nest

I love getting up every morning and checking in with my characters to see what they’re up to. But once I’ve finished a book, I’m lost. I’ve spend months living with these people and all of a sudden, they don’t need me any more. Talk about empty-nest syndrome!!

 

It was either stick my head in the oven, or take a vacation. So, Jim and I went to New England and went whale-watching. AWESOME!!! (See picture)

 

Next thing is the official Book Launch Party, which is being hosted by neighborhood friends Betty Hanacek and Ron Loines.  If you live in the neighborhood, you’re invited. (See invitation)

 

You can get your copy of Crossing the Moss Line before the official launch by visiting booklocker.com or ordering it from your favorite online bookstore. You can also see more vacation pictures and read a couple of chapters FREE  at www.freethorne.com

Here is the information about the launch party.

OFFICIAL BOOK LAUNCH PARTY FOR

GRACE HAWTHORNE'S LATEST BOOK,

CROSSING THE MOSS LINE.

Sunday, September 11, 3:00 - 6:00
147 Springdale Drive

RSVP: betty@parkpride.org



Latest News

Crossing the Moss Line is now available at booklocker.com or from your favorite online book store. 

My long-suffering husband, Jim, has redesigned and updated our website to include the new book.  It looks great. If you have a minute, check it out at
www.freethorne.com.

And then please, send him an email to tell him how you like it. jfreeman@freethorne.com


BOOKS AT CALLANWOLDE

I was on the program at the 14th Day for Women by Women's Imaginative Guild of Storytellers (WIGS) and told a story about Irma Rombauer who wrote Joy of Cooking.
Because of her inexperience, she got talked into signing over the copyright to her original self-published book to Bobbs Merrill Publishing.
They didn't know diddly about cookbooks, but they did know about promotion.  Since it first came out in 1931, JOC has sold 18 MILLION copies worldwide.

As a vendor at the event, I didn't sell 18 million copies of Crossing the Moss Line, but I did sell 18 copies, which isn't too bad for a first outing.

Thanks to all the new readers.  Enjoy!

CROSING THE MOSS LINE IS HERE

Whew!!!  After all this time, Crossing the Moss Line is actually here. I will be introducing the book at the 14th Annual Day of Discovery for Women at Callanwolde Fine Arts Center, Saturday, July 30.

 You can order your copy right now. Just click on this link, booklocker.com/book/8712.html or go to booklocker.com and enter the title, Crossing the Moss Line. You can read the first two chapters FREE.

 

Crossing the Moss Line is also available from your favorite online book store and it is downloadable to your e-reader.

 Now comes the hard part, promotion. You can play a big part by posting a review on Amazon and/or Goodreads and sharing information through your social media.  

 Hope you enjoy Crossing the Moss Line.  I'd love to hear from you.

 

 

 

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AND SO WE WAIT SOME MORE....

There are many, many, many steps in getting an idea to a manuscript, to book layout, to page proofs, to cover design, to the printer, to UPS, to the publisher, to their website, to Amazon, to all the online bookstores, etc., etc., etc.

As you can see from our home page, we have a  professionally designed cover. Todd Engle has done a great job once again...he also designed the cover for Waterproof Justice.

You can also read a couple of chapters there.

So now we wait again. It's up to the printer.

Good Omen

I just played a perfect game of solitaire.  That's got to be a good omen, right?

Maybe I should go buy a lottery ticket.

AND NOW WE WAIT....

 

The page proofs have be read and returned to the publisher.

 

The photos for the cover have been uploaded to the designer.

 

A pre-publication order has been placed for books.

 

And now we wait…..

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One Step Closer

I'm reading page proofs, the last reading before everything becomes final. I've found a few typos.  I honestly believe they create themselves when no one is looking.

FYI, there was an article in the Atlanta Journal Constitution about Geechee life.  Interesting. Google Geechee Life Endures to read it.


It's Done!!!

cover

Here’s a mock-up of the cover.

The manuscript and art work have been submitted to the publisher. I used part of a quote from friend and author Morgan James (Author of the Promise McNeal mystery series and the Southern novel, Sing Me An Old Song) on the front cover. It says “Crossing the Moss Line is a Southern tale spiced with drama, authentic dialogue and just the right amount of wicked humor.”

            Go to www.freethorne.com to read the first two chapters and learn the release date as soon as it becomes available. 

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What do you think?

The back cover material is supposed to tempt readers to buy your book.  Here's mine, finally. As usual it taken me almost as long to write this as it did to write the book. What do you think?

Newton's third law states that for every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction.

In other words, actions can frequently cause surprising and unintended consequences.

 

When….

         …the Geechee people are brought to Ibo Island,

…Cora Strayhorn causes an accident,

…the Donegan sisters are resurrected,

 …Lucile Dupree gets thwarted again,

…Granny Johnson tricks the bank man,

…Matt Reeve finally gets caught,

…Butch Dupree and his gang run amuck,

…Bird Hamlin disappears,

…Dr. Buzzard works some white magic,

…the Mayor sets up a secret poker game,

…Hattie Tuscano agrees to run a cathouse,

…and an unexpected guest comes to visit…

 

…that’s when the chicanery and the machinations begin.

Change is hard

This has nothing to do with my book, but it has a lot to do with my work.


I got a new office chair…after 40 years. It’s nice, but it doesn’t “hold” me like my old chair. Over the years, we had gotten to be friends, it let me slouch, this one is making me sit up straight. I could lean back in my old chair and put my feet up on my desk. This one is reluctant to let me do that. My old chair was soft and comfortable. This one is firm. It gives me support, but it doesn’t support me, if you know w hat I mean.


            So why did I get rid (actually it’s still here) of the old one. Because the wheels came off, literally. We changed out the wheels to protect the hardwood floors and the replacements never quite fit. As a result, from time to time, a wheel or two would come off and dump me on the floor.


            So here I sit, uncomfortable and undecided.  What now?

One Step Closer

            Corrections are made. Revisions are done. I moved the sequence in several chapters around so they made more sense.  Even after reading his manuscript more times than I can count, I saw a couple of typos I missed before. 


            So now the whole thing is in the hands of the proofreader…who will undoubtedly find things we all (13 of us) missed.


             I’m working on front-of-the-book stuff.  And the beat goes on….

The Story Continues

I met with the Beta Readers last Wednesday and now I’m busy with revisions. The most amazing thing about working with this group of nine intelligent women, is that they all see different things. One is great for spotting anything to do with numbers. Another is more fact/history oriented. Another spots inconsistencies in the time line and they all spot different misspellings and typos.

 

            Jim and I spread out all the manuscripts on the dining room table and then page by page we go through them and consolidate the comments into one master copy. That’s the one I take into the office and use to correct my master file.

 

            So back to work. Have to get all the revisions done by May 31 so I can turn the manuscript over to the proofreader who will find things we all missed…guaranteed.

IT'S HERE!!!!

Tonight I meet with the beta readers to get their comments and feedback.

I'm both excited and nervous.
 
I'll be back tomorrow to let you know what happens.

Crossing the Moss Line in 25 words or less

I haven’t been posting here lately because I haven’t been writing lately. (I’m waiting for the report from the beta readers.) What I have been doing is trying to write a blurb for the front cover that tells the story in 25 words or less.  That’s much harder than writing a book of 80,000 words.

 

            Here’s what I finally came up with for Crossing the Moss Line.  “A tale of dirty tricks and consequences in the mid-40s stretching from Georgia’s Barrier Islands to NYC and back.”               

It Ain't Over

After you get the first draft done, it ain’t over, not by a long shot. I’m lucky to have a group of beta readers. However, while they are reading, there are other things to do like write copy for the front and back covers. Your publisher may assign someone to read (you hope) the book and write sparkling copy (you hope) and makes browsers want to buy your book (you hope).

 

            If you are lucky, you get to write this material yourself. If you don’t know the essence of your book, who does. Generally speaking, I find it harder to write back copy than to write the book. It needs to be short, about 125 words, easy to read, grab the readers’ attention, but not give the plot away.  Here’s the back copy for Crossing the Moss Line.

 

Every action….

 

The Geechee people are brought to Ibo Island in 1802.

Matt Reeve discovers an unknown old-growth forest.

Cora insists on driving home in the rain.

The Donegan sisters come out of hiding.

Lucile Dupree is determined to get rich no matter what.

Butch and his gang didn’t mean any harm.

Bird Cotton listens to the wrong person.

Dr. Buzzard works some white magic.

The Mayor and his friends set up a secret poker game.

Hattie Tuscano agrees to run a cat house in exchange for peace and quiet.

 

has a reaction…often with unintended consequences. That’s when the fun begins.

It really does take a village

One of the things that fascinates me is dialogue, the way people talk. There are folks in New Orleans and folks in Brooklyn who both substitute “d” for “th.” Dat’s really interesting.

 

Yiddish has it’s own charm and rhythm. When I first moved to NYC,  I saw a cartoon in the New Yorker of an inn with a sign out front that said, “George Washington shlep here. I didn’t get the joke. (It has nothing to do with sleep. Shlep means to drag or pull) Little by little all New Yorkers absorb Yiddish into their language.

 

I have a character, Sadie Glanzrock, in Crossing the Moss Line. I also have a friend and storytelling buddy who is doing me a mitzvah to read the NY chapters to make sure Sadie sounds like a proper Jewish mother.

 

It truly does take a village to write a book.

I'VE GOT THE BLUES!!

Boy, have I ever got the blues. Yesterday I delivered 10 copies of the manuscript for Crossing the Moss Line to my beta readers. That’s the good news, because this group is awesome.

The bad news is that yesterday I delivered 10 copies of the manuscript for Crossing the Moss Line to my beta readers. That means for the moment I’m finished, i.e. I don’t have anything to work on. After spending every day and a lot of nights with the characters of CTML, they are gone. And to make matters worse, Jim had an appointment this morning so I’m wondering around an empty house.

 Oh well, life goes on. I guess I’ll go sort my sock drawer.

It's Done!

Well, it’s done.  I just put a period to the last chapter. Of course, that doesn’t mean I’m really finished because now comes the polishing and the first revision. There will be more.  As Dorothy Parker once said, “I can’t write five words but that I change seven.”

 Time to start editing now from the beginning.

Woops!!!

Probably because I’ve always been healthy, I don’t deal with physical problems very well. I’m a terrible patient.  Anyway, I lost a couple of days from work, but now I’m back.

 

Got a short extension from my beta readers.  The manuscript was due tomorrow…FAT CHANCE.  But I will have a complete rough draft for them on Monday. (Once it’s in print and been circulated, it has to be true, right?”

I've hit a brick wall

I’ve hit a brick wall. In order to reach the minimum number of words I need to make this a proper book, I need to write at lest four more chapters. I kinda have an idea for two or three, but… I don’t want to resort to “puffin” just to fill up space. 

 

Puffin is when you write, “At the sound of the knock on the door, Cora sighed, put down her book, stuffed her feet into her shoes, got up and slowly made her way across the room” instead of writing, “At the sound of the knock, Cora opened the door.”

 

Gotta do something.

Your assignment is to write....

            Do you remember when your English teacher said, “Write 250 words about your summer vacation?” Well, that’s where I am with Crossing the Moss Line. I’m moving from the creative side to the mechanical side.

            The rule of thumb is that it takes 80,000 words to qualify as a book. I’ve come to a stopping place in the book (not the end exactly) and I currently have 63,512 words. So my assignment this week is to go back through the text and see where I need more description, more insight, more….words.

We visit the Governor

            No writing today. Jim and I both have photographs that have been selected as part of the Art of Georgia competition. We’re off to deliver our photographs and get our pictures taken with Governor Nathan Deal.  (Gotta love a governor who supports the arts.)

            Back to work tomorrow.

 

    ms   cmb


 

                          

Down to the Wire

Have I mentioned the beta readers who are working with me on this book?  They were a great advantage on Waterproof Justice. Like having ten editors instead of one. I give them an  unpolished, first draft which they read and critiqued.

 

I am trying to get the manuscript in shape to make copies  and deliver them by April 20. There’s good and bad news here. Their help is definitely the good news. The bad news is that I have to make an end and that makes me sad. I’ll miss spending time each day Crossing the Moss Line.

One Size Fits All---Sometime

At the end of  Tell the Wolves I’m Home (which I recommend, by the way) Carol Rifka Brunt says, “It warms my heart that most of the time the facts of the world have fit my story just right.”

             By happy accident, I just found a fact of the world to fit the end of Crossing the Moss Line. I needed an important person to step forward, and I found FDR. That not only warmed my heart, it provided me with an ending, which isn’t finished yet, but at least now I have something to work with.

Expect the Unexpected

            Today I finished two chapters. That’s a milestone. I can’t remember ever doing that before. Actually I had some fairly extensive notes on one, so what I really did was pull together two chapters. However, there’s nothing like a deadline to make me knuckle down. (Old habit left over from working for a newspaper)

 

            There are two old  ladies—really, they’re in their  90s—in this story, the Donegan sisters. I’ve had such fun giving them unexpected things to do. They’ve turned out to be some of my favorite characters. I hope you’ll like meeting them too.

Oy Vey!!! I missed a day.

            Checking in again. I’ve been working overtime and I’ve finally moved the story back from New York City to Meridian, Georgia.

Back home were my characters say y’all instead of yous. Back home where they eat biscuits instead of bagels. Back home on Ibo Island where they can walk to someone’s house without  having to check a subway map.

The writing should start to move faster now since I don’t have to double check some many unknowns.

It takes a book store

I have a lot of reference books in my office. Some of them change depending on what I’m working on. Like the Yat Dictionary  of New Orleans slang (for Waterproof Justice) and all the Geechee/Gullah books I’m using now.


There are the usual dictionaries and a well-used Thesaurus.  And maps, lots of maps, and phone books, which I’ve already confessed to stealing.


Then there are The Others: a Dictionary of Contemporary and Colloquial Usage, a Dictionary of Contemporary American Lingoes and Slang, a Comedy Thesaurus, Elements of Business Writing, the Harvard Brief Dictionary of Music, a Comedy Quote Dictionary, The Slang of Sin, The Joys of Yiddish and my favorite, Jackie Mason’s How to Talk Jewish. My character, Sophie Glanzrock, has sent me back to my Jewish books.


            It may take a village to raise a child, but in my case it takes a bookstore to write a book.

(Oh, and did I mention Google?)

I love Google

I know I’ve said this before but I love Google. This morning I was writing about tokens for the NY subways and it occurred to me that I should check to see if riders were actually using token in 1943. Turns out, they were not.

 

The original fee was a nickel, not 5 pennies, but a nickel. Then the fare went to a dime, not two nickels but a dime. When the fare went to 15 cents, the machines couldn’t handle two coins of different sizes so in 1953, tokens were introduced. They were ultimately replaced by the Metro card.

 

It took me less than five minutes to get all that information. No wonder I love Google.


Dorothy Parker

Dorothy Parker once said, “I can’t write five words but that I change seven.” That’s what I’ve been doing for the past several days…changing words. At the half-way point, I go back and read what I’ve written so far to see if it hangs together and try to fix it if it doesn’t.

It’s a scary proposition because I always know I’m going to have to throw some things out. The trick is to know what to trash and what to keep.

Cast of Characters

Yesterday I wrote the back story for Matt.  Since the characters are more or less set in concrete now, here’s a cast of major characters.

 Geechee community on Ibo Island:

Bessie Harding Johnson, Granny

Ammee and Jacob Cotton and their children Reeann and Bird

 

Meridian, GA (mainland)

George Madison Reeve (Matt)

Cora Reeve, his wife, and Katie their daughter

Mayor Maurice Dupree, his wife Lucile and their son Butch

Hattie Tuscano, wild card

Radio Images

I was at a storytelling meeting last night and we were discussing radio and how it required listeners to create pictures in their minds. As I started writing this morning I realized that’s what writers do. At least that’s what we try to do.

I want you to see what I see in my head. Once I’ve gotten to the end of the story, I’ll need to go back and make sure I’ve given you enough word pictures to get a clear picture of Ibo Island and New York and all the rest.

            BTW, at 11:05 I crossed the half-way mark. 110 pages, 40,510 words….and counting.

Recreating NYC in 1943

H&H 1.jpgThe story has now moved to NYC in 1943 with subway fares at a nickel and meals at Horn and Hardart, the Automat, for a pocket full of change.

            Anyone out there remember either of those?

            As much as I love writing historic fiction, being accurate can be a pain in the neck. Thank goodness for friends who can help with specific research.

I broke 100!!!

I finished the first 101 pages this morning.

Now I only have 199 more to go.

(Did you know it takes 300 pages to qualify as a novel?)




The golden days of radio

Entertainment in 1942 meant radio and most of the shows had elaborate introductions. Here are two. Look for one of them in Crossing the Moss Line.

 

"Hi-Yo, Silver! A fiery horse with the speed of light, a cloud of dust and a hearty ‘Hi-Yo Silver'... The Lone Ranger! With his faithful Indian companion, Tonto, the daring and resourceful masked rider of the plains led the fight for law and order in the early Western United States. Nowhere in the pages of history can one find a greater champion of justice. Return with us now to those thrilling days of yesteryear. From out of the past come the thundering hoof-beats of the great horse Silver. The Lone Ranger rides again!"

 

“As a bullet seeks it’s target, shining rails in every part of our great country are aimed at Grand Central Station, heart of the nation’s greatest city. Drawn by the magnetic force of the fantastic metropolis, day and night great trains rush toward the Hudson River, sweep down its eastern bank for 140 miles, flash briefly by the long red row of tenement houses south of 125th Street, dive with a roar into the two-and-a-half miles tunnel which burrows beneath the glitter and swank of Park Avenue and then…Grant Central Station! Crossroads of a million private lives. Gigantic stage on which are played a thousand dramas daily.”

 Philco PT 6

 

Bad is Fun

Yesterday I worked on the “Lucile chapter.” She is selfish, unpleasant, totally unlikable and great fun to write. I hope she turns out to be the character you love to hate.

 

            Today, the story moves from the island of Ibo to the island of Manhattan and the Bronx. So it’s time to get out the maps of the city and the subway lines and to resurrect memories of when I used to live in The Big Apple.

It's been a long day.

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It’s 6:00 and it has been a long day. There is a spiritual which goes something like this:

            So high you can’t get over it,

            So wide you can’t get ‘round it

            So deep you can’t get under it

            You gotta go through at the door.

 

That’s where I was this morning and where I have been since last week. I just could not get around the problem I created for myself.

 

But with a lot of brainstorming with Jim and lots of ideas we threw out the window, I finally come up with something I think works. Now I’m going to go read this chapter to Jim and see what he thinks.